About Great Outdoors Copywriting

(Long-Form Copy)

The great American writer and outdoorsman, Mark Twain, once said, “The difference between the almost right word and the right word is really a large matter—’tis the difference between the lightning-bug and the lightning.”

At Great Outdoors Copywriting, I strive to bring greatness to your copywriting and marketing projects with copy that makes a big difference — whether you are in the Outdoors Industry or not. Even if you’re in the office-cubicle business, I bring a breath of fresh air to your marketing efforts.

With a decade of copywriting experience and two more decades of professional writing experience as a journalist, editor, English teacher, and magazine writer, I can write the crap out of just about anything you can throw at me.

While my clients don’t always share their results with me, I’ve been able to account for more than $6 million in new revenue that my copy and marketing expertise has generated for my clients over the past decade.

From email autoresponders to long-form sales letters, I’ve written it all. From Asia to Europe and across all three coasts of the United States — that’s the East Coast, the West Coast, and the Great Lakes (for any uninitiated) — I’ve been helping companies, government, and non-profits build followers, sell more, raise funding, and get the word out.

And if you’re in the Outdoors Industry, then you’re in real luck because my love of adventure, wilderness, and working up a sweat under open skies makes it even easier for me to get in the heads of your prospective customers, patrons, and clients.

But you don’t take my word for it, check out the testimonials at right from some of the top copywriters in the world — and a few case studies below.

CASE STUDIES

DR Power Inc.

This Vermont-based company makes “DR Chipper” wood chippers and other power equipment and hand tools for folks who live out in the country and like to take care of things themselves. Typical customer is an affluent male, living in the country, 35-55 years old. The DR Chipper is one of the company’s top sellers, but sales had been flat for years. I approached DR with some ideas for improving sales, and even though they have in-house copywriters, they took me up on my offer and assigned me the task of writing that year’s 16-page chipper catalogue in exchange for a new chipper (a $4,000 machine). Solution: I worked closely with the in-house marketing team to develop a new strategy – previous catalogues were focused on technical specs and what the machines could do. While this was important and we used that information in the new catalogue, we refocused the entire campaign on the benefits of these machines to these independent-minded property owners (create your own mulch, cover muddy areas, protect your house from forest fires, etc.) Results: That year’s catalogue brought in an extra $1 million in business for the company. We worked together on several more projects over the years, and some of that copy is still being used in new materials.

Biomedical Research Laboratories

The company has been in business for about a decade and sells it’s nutritional supplements mostly through direct marketing – using websites and advertorials strategically placed in niche magazines. I met the marketing director at the AWAI Bootcamp for copywriters and was hired to help launch a new product (Altitude RX), which helps prevent altitude sickness for those traveling from lower elevations to the mountains. They needed web copy and advertorials. Solution: With the marketing director, we came up with several segments of the prospective market (skiers and snowboarders, hikers and climbers, elk hunters, and military personnel operating at high elevation) and tailored the advertorials to those segments. The advertorials drove traffic to the web site, which was also SEO optimized to attract web searchers. The web copy covered all the segments and used special offers to convert site visitors to buyers. This was a classic problem-solution approach to the copy with this headline: “Tomorrow You’ll Have 25% Less Oxygen to Breathe … Is Your Body Ready?” Results: While the company does not release specific marketing results, the marketing director continued to hire me for numerous assignments for the next few years. Recently, Biomedical Research Laboratories made Inc. 500 magazine’s list of the nation’s fastest-growing private companies with a three-year growth rate of 1,137 percent. I like to think that I played a small part in their success.

Harbor Springs Public Schools

Familiar with my work, the Superintendent of my local school district asked me to spearhead a campaign committee to get a $3.2 million bond issue passed in our community. The timing was terrible, though. The local papers and TV news were filled with negative stories about the district – one elementary principal was under suspension but still receiving full pay while waiting the results of a DUI charge and the district was spending tens of thousands of dollars on lawyers over an alleged “wrongful termination” lawsuit filed by the former technology coordinator. Even though most district technology was about 7 years old, the district could only do so much to help pass the bond issue. State laws prohibit school officials from actively campaigning to pass a bond issue and limit the district to providing objective information only. Solution: I volunteered my time to lead the citizen campaign committee, and we had a lot of negative sentiments to overcome. Working closely with school officials, parents, and concerned citizens, we put together a web site outlining the key benefits to the community and the school for approving this tax. Although it had been seven years since the district’s last significant investment in technology, it still seemed like the community had just recently voted to increase funding for technology. Our most powerful tool was a flyer I wrote and designed showing a “poster child” to illustrate the time perspective from a student’s point of view. It showed the same boy as a little kid when the last bond issue was passed and a 6-foot teenager at the time of the vote. The flyer detailed how the taxpayers’ overall school-tax bills would be going down (even if they passed the bond issue) because an older bond for a new building was ending. Results: While our campaign did not spark a landslide of support for the bond issue, the measure passed by a mere 18 votes. As the Superintendent later told me, “There was no way it would have passed without your efforts!” My daughter was just entering Kindergarten at the time, but now she is a tech-savvy 3rd grader who gets to take home a school iPad every day to help her work on her math, social studies, and reading.

Rich is one of those copywriters that just plain “gets it”. His catalog copy virtually jumps off the page, with a style and sizzle that you rarely see from other copywriters. And his passion for the outdoors is remarkable–I know if I needed outdoor copy, he’d be the first I would call. Before you look anywhere else, make sure you check out Rich’s services first. You won’t regret it!

Jay White

Copywriting Swami of the Ozarks, RCS Publishing, LLC

I’ve had the pleasure to work with Rich in a peer review group of copywriters, reading and reviewing one another’s work. Rich has impressed me with his energy and passion, as well as his writing ability. He brings a lot of marketing know-how to the table, and his writing is consistently above par. If you’re looking for an outdoor copywriter who can hit the mark, Rich is your man.

Kathryn Aragon

Content Strategist & Consultant | Author | Trainer, Kathryn Aragon Media

If you’re responsible for growing sales for an outdoor or recreation products company, you’ll want to work with Rich Bachus! He’s an incredibly strong copywriter and marketing strategist who can help you improve the power of your sales copy, search engine optimization, and results. I’m so impressed with his energy and his ability to uncover exciting benefits that make his sales copy irresistible to prospects. I’ve had the pleasure of being a copywriter colleague of Rich’s for a couple years now, and he’s a complete joy to work with. Plus he’s the real deal when it comes to understanding the outdoors market. I highly recommend Rich.

Pam Foster

Director, Copywriting Training and a Certified SEO Copywriter, AWAI, Inc.

I had the pleasure working with Rich in one of my copywriting workshops. He is obviously a very talented and experienced writer — especially when it concerns anything to do with the outdoors. More importantly, he’s a solid marketer and has a knack for crafting persuasive, motivating copy. I highly recommend him.

Steve Slaunwhite

Award-winning copywriter & workshop leader | Author, The Everything Guide To Writing Copy (Simon & Schuster), SteveSlaunwhite.com

Rich is a diligent copywriter and well trained in the most up to date methods of direct response copy — online, seo, social media, advertorials, mail, email, editorial content, and more. Taking advantage of his personal experience with active-nature and his marketing focused copy gives his outdoors related clients a dangerous advantage over their competitors.

Robert Nomura

Founder and Copywriting Specialist, LeadGenWerx

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